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"This is something I could write in my sleep..."
It was OK but everything was just a "stream of consciousness". A free flow of thoughts and associations.
I gave this to my wife Sandy, who is an author and poet and she was very surprised:
"I could write this in my sleep!"
Since I know her well, I believe her and I will encourage her to do not only that but produce an even better book with maybe two other ways to write poems, to make up a new type in this genre.
Good poetry, but Nobel Prize material? Sorry, no...